Alt-text: "I fear I might reach the limit of what I am able to do at home with pen, pencil and a scanner :/"

First of all, sorry if some sides of this page got a bit chopped off. Especially the second one is hit bad, I actually cut a word off, there.

Now, this wraps up chapter three. I am not sure what to make of it. I brought in a lot of things I liked individually, but I fear I might have drawn it out too much and srewed up the pacing. Also it seemed to miss the overarching theme of the chapters before a bit ... I tried to retroactively explain it here in the last strip.  A bit of lazy writing, sorry.

To make up for it, have a double length strip, some gay cuddling, bdsm sex and an Eluveitie reference (cookies for finding the last one).

Thanks for those few of you who still have the patience to follow this story ... it's gonna get more exciting eventually, but it'll need to build up. If there's a fight happening to my protagonists, it's going to be a big and rather scary thing for them and not just a random action Scene. At least that's the plan.

Have a nice week. :)

Updated on 2018-05-18

One thought on “page209

  1. Jay, cookies! *omnomnom*
    had no trouble finding it! good one!

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