Another small mistake … Shara thinks “Lurker” instead of “Leaper” … but then again she thought it was lurker until recently she just thought the wrong word, so …. yeah, totally not an accident.
Updated on 2017-09-24: And here we have the 4th type of Common Comic Bubble Types ™: The thought bubble. I thought a while about how to do them so you can easily discern them from the rest, especially the whisper bubbles … I’m not sure if I’ll keep going with the blurred dark grey ones or try something else next time. We’ll see.
(Also I had to leave an awful lot of white behind in this one when getting rid of the old bubbles … I might have to just make the new ones bigger, even if they’ll have a lot of white space in them, then … )
Updated on 2017-10-03: Like suggested, made the thought bubbles italic and fixed Shara to think of the “Leaper”, that it is ;)
Katharina: <frightened> Shara? H-Help!
Shara: <thinks> Nature's mercy, girl ... scream louder and you'll alert two more beasts ... What kind of pathetic, naive, would-be wizard are you ... Mh ... Could use her as a bait for that lurker. Yeah.
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Shara: <thinks> "Fourth Grade" ... bullshit. Fucking magicians. To hell with them. Just like ...
<She hesitates>
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Shara: <thinks> ... just like back then ...
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<Katharina hears the beast lurking somewhere behind her>
Katharina: W-what was that ... ?
<Shara sighs and continues to watch from cover>
Maybe also change the text to italic? That’s how text is usually marked as thoughts in prose, so maybe it would also be a option …
Also: OK, so the “lurker” was totally not an accident … but you could of course still “correct” it now ^^ Or put it into quotation marks to make clear that she thinks it kind of ironically …
Good ideas, updated it again :) I just corrected the word to “leaper” … not much value in the other option I think.